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Chiara III

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Description

Image size
5472x3648px 6.69 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 6D
Shutter Speed
1/250 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
85 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 10, 2014, 5:13:55 PM
Sensor Size
36mm
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The shot has a nice composure and setting, but there is one main thing I would consider for your next shot. While the lighting is nice I think that a narrower aperture would be advisable, as with this photo a little too much is out of focus for my tastes. Changing to an aperture of around 3 or 4 would put a little more of the image in focus, while leaving enough of the background soft enough that it wouldn't draw the focus away from your model. Hope I helped/was fair <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

ps I was nine words short of the required length for the critique so I added this ps section haha.