Is a beautiful piece... all the colors and the focus on the airplane are AMAZING... only one comment about design balance... your sign... it should be up in the top in the left corner.
That is because a better balance on the desing, if you change the sign position, will give us a better feel on the plane direction and having the montain free of sign just above the plane, will change a lot the piece.
The way you put the sign, in the same side than hand and plane... is a graphic design mistake.
I truly enjoy this piece! It caught my eye right away! The warmth of the background gives you a happy, welcome feeling while the rusty colors of the plane gives it a vintage look. The location is absolutely beautiful. You did a great job blending the background so that the plane was the main focus but that the background was still a strong point. The dark bracelet on the arm brings out the darkness in the plane that, once again, makes it look very vintage! I love what you did with editing this picture as well as the idea you had when you took it. Job well done!
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Pure joy- I can smell the grasses and feel the wind- but for some reason, the hand holding the plane is incongruous with the action, the setting, and the object. Not sure if it is the pose of the hand (I love the position of the plane), the bracelet, or what. Too clean? too pale? too old (not a child), too young? I can't put my finger on it, but I love everything else.
That is because a better balance on the desing, if you change the sign position, will give us a better feel on the plane direction and having the montain free of sign just above the plane, will change a lot the piece.
The way you put the sign, in the same side than hand and plane... is a graphic design mistake.
This is what I mean:
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Cheers.
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